sci-fi story

Sci fi DO OVER! Raymond Proo

So I walked into my class ready to turn in my epic story I just wrote, and to my surprise the headman in charge wouldn’t take it. I started to grow angry inside I was wondering why? He’s excuse was because it seems to be taken. I call my ALIEN friend over ß--- (sci fi) he starts to read my story he says it sounds like its mine. I tell him to scan it with his little lens of truth. He does and he couldn’t find no souce or trace of my epic document being taken. but I decide to re-write my story to save my time from arguing. I start to write my other story based on my situation I start to get into it then out of nowhere I receive a call. I pick up my mobile device, the little alien thing says that there has been an arrangement he say that hes read my story and its really epic and he believes that its mine. I leave class and head over to the library. I take a sit in the hovering chair I here the slapping from his feet hitting the marble floor. He approaches me and says “u must take this story and take it to the great master”

I was like “ight its koo” I got up took my story and started to walk out he stops me and with a stern voice he says

“but wait there will be a lota challenges along the way u must be carefull”

“ok? its just a story I wrote intended for my class”

“yes but it contains secrets of the value of life”

“how? Its just something random I wrote at 4a.m. so I can turn it in and pass this class.”

“its because the things you talk about are really controversial and a very thought provoking topic”

I was angry I didn’t kno what this alien was talking about, first I couldn’t turn in my stories for some complications and now this I was getting angry. I whipped out my laser gun and shot him. With that the alarm rang all the little aliens came out. They looked at me then they looked at my document little laser lights started to shine all over the place, it looked like a laser light show to be honest. i ran to hide behind a wall were barely piercing through the wall. I grabbed my heavy assault laser machine rifle mount on top and let the lasers spray. All those little aliens were dropping like so fast they wished they never came out. I turned around and kept running down ,y path encountering those annoying aliens along the way.

As the sunset and the blanket of the darkness covered the land I set up camp. I took out my epic story I had written for my class but was not accepted I’m not going to forget that I was up till 4a.m, I thought to myself. I started to closely read it through and couldn’t find any type of symbolisms, but how if I wrote it? Then I remembered I was half asleep when I wrote this so probably when I was in between my state of consciousness I unlocked and showed some part of my brain and mind which triggered this epic story. I thought to myself what if I go to sleep and then wake up then right when my body starts to doze off and enter the 4^th stage of sleep ill force my mind to read this story. It was going to be a difficult process cause obviously the events that happen during the day can change your mindset and you can unconsciously think about things you usually wouldn’t think about.

As I felt my body start to shut down I kept my mind awake I started to read my story, it felt like I was dreaming like I was in my story. I started to find weird symbols but there were just a blur I was still confused. The most I saw was some great old wise looking alien falling and kept falling down and never hit the ground. I suddenly woke up my heart was racing and I felt like I was falling. I looked around me and saw my campsite. It has felt like ages but it really wasn’t it was just the crack of dawn and the rays of sunlight started to hit burn my face. I turned away, I had forgotten that in this planet the sun is the strongest during the sunrise and sunset.

I started to walk up the hill preparing for the valley bellow full of those lingering aliens. I reached the top of the hill and there was the little town. I dropped the ground and threw on a ghillie suit. I crawled carefully around the shrubs till I got a good lookout. I took out my ultra scoped binoculars and looked down on to the town. I spotted some targets up on the rooftops probably some lookouts caring some snipers. I look to the other side of town. It looked like along way and all the streets and roads where heavily guarded. I touched the sand below me feeling the heat to see if I could get a hint of how the wind was blowing and the temp. i had to clear the rooftop guys to stay unseen and I could just stroll through the town and watch for the guards on the ground. I took out my cheytac. And calculated the dope on the scope. Visibility wasn’t that bad, it was going to be tough to land my shots from all the sand dust lingering in the air. I looked down range. Spotted my targets I had to shoot the main lookout up in the center tower with our the other guards in the outer towers watching. I aimed at the little alien’s head ready to pop it. I looked ready for the right moment to pull the trigger. The rest of the guars made there usual path and turned around to look out of the walls. But one was still looking towards the town. I needed him to turn around. He started to turn around but one of the other guards started to look back I took the shot his little head popped with green splatting everywhere. The other guard saw it happened he was bout to pull the alarm when I took him out.

I exhaled and took in another deep breath the last three where still looking out. I slowly started to take them out taking out the farthest one first. I was returned my scope to the closest he had a sniper in his hand he seemed to be aiming at me, with that a laser shot zoomed past my right shoulder I quickly jumped behind a rock. I calculated where my target would be I couldn’t miss or else I would be done for. I came up all felt slow I quickly spotted my target and brought up my scope and pulled the trigger and hit the ground. I had hit him with a good accurate quick scope.

I gathered my things and started to run down the hill I reached the gates and quickly took out the guards before they even realized who I was. I ran down the narrow streets. I heard the alarm ring shots started to hit the buildings around me. I took a quick glance back quickly spotted the target closes to me and rang the shot. Took him out less dangerous shots were zooming by, the other aliens where still far. I couldn’t go out the main exit it was probably heavily guarded. I started making my way to the south eastern wall. I scaled the wall shots hitting it spraying debri all over the place. One shot hit the strap of my bag, my bag fell down with my very important document in it. I jumped down the alien was bout to grab it until I tornado kicked him. They where coming from all sides. I hooked kicked one and made my way through there. I started to run up the stairs of the south eastern tower. I got to the top I could here the splashing footsteps coming up. I looked around, I spotted a haystack on the at the bottom on the other side of the wall. I leaped all the way down and hit the hay stack with a great impact. Didn’t feel so bad with the haystack to cushion it I started to run up the great mountain where the great master was located. I ran up the long stairs. And reached the entrance.

I busted the great big doors open, there he was. He stood up in astonishment ready to defend himself. I tossed him the bag with the documents and commanded him to read it.

As he read the great alien’s face grew with fear. He looked at me and snarled “you’re here to kill me and take over”

I still didn’t kno what this was really replied “I don’t know what your talking bout”

“oh yes you do read the last part” he tossed it back to me I read it and learned that he was the corrupt leader of this planet, ive been looking for this guy forever and now he was right in front of me. I took my gun and pointed up. But when I targeted my target wasn’t there anymore. I looked around frantically for my target I saw him running down the stairs I pointed my gun right when I pulled the trigger I felt my arm thrown back it was one of those tough alien guards. I started to fight back as fast as I could and take him out. He came at me with a right hook I ducked right under and countered it with a tornado/butterfly twist kick. He stumbled down to the ground I dove for my gun. He jumped in the air after me I quickly turned around and shot through his heart. I was sprayed with green glue.

I stayed at the top and saw the great master alien running toward his little space ship. I took out my cheytac and adjusted the dope on my scope. I leaded my target right when the wind speed was correct I pulled the trigger after about 2 secs I saw my target drop. Pretty epic shot. I took my seat on the throne and my document was burned from the light coming from the sky.

The end